NaNoWriMo 2014 – The End of the Road

Take a look at the Picometer on the Home page.  I hit the NaNoWriMo goal!

FIREWORKS

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Okay, I cheated, starting with 23,187 words, but the real objective wasn’t to take the NaNo challenge.  I wanted to get this book started.  And I have reached 52,921 words so far.  Last night, I was up late and I wrote 4,100 words and BOY I’m tired.

Now to push on and finish.  I found another meter I can use to track my Secret Book progress, and I’ve uploaded it as a widget.  You can see it to the right on the main page, just above the Picometer, which I’ll leave in place for a few more days.

I have no idea how many words I’ll write before I reach the end, so I’m going to set the goal at 100,000.

That should cover most of my shenanigans. 

That should cover most of my shenanigans.

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Here’s hoping it won’t take that many (that’s kind of long).  Word count for adult novels varies, but typically, 80,000–90,000 is standard for most commercial novels.  Secret Book should run around 90+, I’m thinking, when the preliminary draft is finished.

I expect it to balloon to over 100K during rewrites, but after that, I shall edit it down until it’s as spare as I want it to be.  This blog post by Jessica Alvarez at BookEnds Literary Agency is from 2009, but I found it helpful.  The comments are rather interesting as well.

After the draft is done—scenes written and assembled in order, I will take a step back and research the parts I had to gloss over.

It may not be the most efficient process, but it’s MY process. 

It may not be the most efficient process, but it’s MY process.

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Keep an eye on the meter–when I type The End, I’ll update the goal setting to wherever I stop.

Vintage Stuff in Secret Book and NaNoWriMo2014 – The End but not the Finish

Many think of period literature as nineteenth-century or earlier, but writing something set within living memory is even more fraught with danger.  If I get it wrong, there will be no shortage of people eager to point it out.  Below, in no particular order, are some of the things I have to consider in writing a book set in the 1960s and 1970s (with excursions into the 1950s).

Gadgets.  It was harder for people to do things back then without the technology we have today.  Watch some old television shows and notice plot points that would never work now that everyone has a smartphone.

THEN:

Someone gets hopelessly lost (usually in the desert because the show was shot near Los Angeles), and they either die or there is a frantic search to find them before it’s too late.

NOW:

GPS, baby.  Not only can you use it to find your way home, you can track people with it too.  I had to remember this for Rose’s Hostage and had the bank robber ditch Libby’s phone so the cops couldn’t track her.

You can run, but you can’t hide. 

You can run, but you can’t hide.

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THEN:

A character has to find a pay phone to call someone and warn them of danger.  They can’t find one, so all hell breaks loose.

NOW:

Everyone has a cell, and this would only work if they were in the damn woods or locked in a stone basement with no signal.

The world was introduced to a lot of new technologies in the mid to late twentieth century.   What they used at the time was considered current to them.  Their reactions to a new gadget, one we might laugh at, would be pretty much the same as ours.

It’s the latest thing!  We should get one for the office!

It’s the latest thing!  We should get one for the office!

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Slang.  British and American slang at the time is devilishly hard to replicate.  Though the most obvious catchphrases are easy to suss out, I keep running into things that I know aren’t right but I haven’t figured out yet.

Since the only thing I can remember from the 1960s is the moon landing and the 1970s were all kid stuff for me, I shall have to pick the brains of older relatives and friends who weren’t so square (see, there’s one) back in the day.   In a first draft, I get round this by typing NNNNN in place of something or CHECK so I can go back and find it again.

Details of daily life.  I didn’t grow up in Britain, so checking this part will require a lot of googling and perhaps some interviewing.  I did get some post-war reminiscences from some of the very nice English people who were staying at my B&B in Cardiff, and yes, those are going in the book.

Even though I was a kid, I do remember quite a bit from the 1970s in America.  I grew up in a middle-class home, and our experience was pretty typical.  I remember certain food products, full-service gas stations, the energy crisis, etc.

Clothing.  I already did some research for this in London when I visited the Fabric and Textile Museum on Bermondsey Road.  I remember people wore a lot of knitwear in the 1970s.  I’ve still had to do some googling.   It slipped my mind how butt-ugly some of the clothes were back then.

Did we actually WEAR this? 

Did we actually WEAR this?

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Décor.  Dear sweet Jesus on a hotdog bun.

Enough said.

Enough said.

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Politics and world events.  While most of Secret Book isn’t concerned with these things, it lends more authenticity to have people mention them.  The Vietnam War was a hot-button topic, for example.  And American Character in particular would remember the Kennedy assassination in 1963; my real-life friends who are old enough to recall it still talk about it on November 22.

You  might wonder why I chose the 1970s as the present-day setting for the book, but all I can tell you right now is that I have two main reasons:

  • I’m trying to avoid the internet.
  • The decade was very avant-garde, and it was all about being yourself and what you are, the Me Decade, etc.  This will make sense when I can talk more about it.

People still wrote letters in the 1960s and 1970s, and you could smoke on airplanes.  So, writing in a different period takes a lot of thinking and reconsidering.  It’s like time travel, only without the TARDIS.

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NaNoWriMo News

I have 45,059 words written on Secret Book.  It will definitely hit the 50K mark before NaNoWriMo ends, but I am nowhere near finished.  That’s okay; the goal was to get my ass in gear on this first draft, and it’s working, for the most part.

This is a thing today.

This is a thing today.

I decided to go whole hog and put Brit Character’s POV scenes in UK English, spellings and all, so I changed the Word language settings for those bits.  It’s fun to deliberately type in US English and watch the program (programme!) change it.  So far I’ve got very few errors, though I keep forgetting the u in flavour, colour, parlour, honour, and the like.  Also, the word woollies is in the UK English spellchecker and that amused me to no end.  (Yes, the book does have that word in it.)

 I find it highly annoying that the pronunciation link says the word in an American accent. 

I find it highly annoying that the pronunciation link says the word in an American accent.

 Screen capture:  Google

I still have a lot to do on American Character (okay, most of her stuff, actually).  So I’ll be writing on this for a while.  Then I have more research to do, so I can authenticate everything and fill it out a little more.  My word count will be huge, but that’s what editing is for.

Like this. 

Like this.

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So, back to work.

Save the London Book Barge! and NaNoWriMo whatever; I’ve lost track now

Remember this?

The book barge, Word on the Water.  Step inside (watch your head) and discover a nice selection of used books. 

The London book barge, Word on the Water.  Step inside (watch your head) and discover a nice selection of used books.

Word on the Water needs our help!  They put in for a permanent tender at Paddington Station, and the Canal and River Trust of London awarded the place instead to a large corporation who wanted to put a coffee boat there.  Seriously.  Like there aren’t any coffee shops anywhere near Paddington (there are a zillion coffee shops in London).

Matt Zitron has written an impassioned plea in a HuffPo article about it.  Read it; I’ll wait.

Done?  Please consider signing the petition, even if you’re not a Londoner.  If you are, don’t let big business kill the little places that give London its charm. Bookshops are in the business of selling dreams, and we all need a little of that.  Plus, a floating bookstore is the height of cool and these people are very nice.  Thank you.

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Okay, now that I’m off my soapbox, I have completely lost track of NaNoWriMo.  I’m hanging on by a thread here!

Secret Book is coming along; however, there is NO way I’m going to be finished by the end of the month.  I expect to reach the NaNo 50,000-word goal, but it is not going to be done until I’m done.  Probably not until Christmas, actually.

And I still have a metric ton of research to do.  It’s not a problem.  I have time.  Right now, all I want to do is finish the damn thing.

In Tunerville news, I sent off a submission copy.  Since that will take approximately three months for them to review it (if they do), and I forgot to enclose the SASE for my rejection (sigh), I’ll probably never know if they even looked at it.  So back to the queries.

In Rose’s Hostage news, there is no news.  Sorry to disappoint you (and me!).  Brian did say he was putting a manuscript in the mail; let’s hope it was mine.

Now I must leave you, as I need to finish one scene and begin another that I didn’t have time to do at lunch today.  Go read a book (and sign that petition!).

NaNoWriMo 2014 – Baby it’s cold outside

Brr, it’s cold in here.  The weather has turned.  Autumn is segueing into winter.  Though I’m enjoying the Wearing of the Scarves (all six of the ones I bought in the UK, though not at once), I’m not liking the frigid wind much.  Poor little Psycho Kitty is going to need her space blanket insulation much sooner than I thought.

This happened during the polar vortex last year.

This happened during the polar vortex last year.

Photo:  Elizabeth West

I’d do it tonight, but she’s ensconced in her doghouse and I don’t want to haul her out to wrap it.  She didn’t emerge when I checked on her earlier, a sign that she’s not comfortable outside it.  It’s somewhat warmer in there, and she has a fluffy bed and a wrap round it, so she’ll be fine for now.

NaNoWriMo news:  word count is 1,821 today, and I am counting the 289 I wrote previously and plugged into this scene where they belong.

As for the Universe, I’m still mad at it.  I completely understand what it’s like to be this person right now.

Kinda wishing I had her powers, too. 

Kinda wishing I had her powers, too.

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So the book is coming along despite the ridiculousness that is my life.  I finished correcting Tunerville, I have a very nice cover letter written for its submission to Imprint-of-Big-Publisher, and I actually slept all the way through last night without waking up.

Keep your fingers crossed for my submission. I have a feeling the books will be just the spell I need.  Let’s hope for a good outcome.  Magic always has a price, as you know.

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NaNoWriMo 2014 – Remember remember, the Fifth of November.

Gunpowder, treason, and plot.

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It’s Guy Fawkes Night in England, otherwise known as Bonfire Night.  Read about it here because I’m too tired to explain it to you.

Speaking of plot, the Universe took the big shit on me today, and I channeled my pain into three scenes for Secret Book that I was going to save, but they demanded my attention tonight.  I have not eaten and I have cried my eyes out and I can barely see, but there they are.

5,218 words.

Good night.

NaNoWriMo Day 1 – I was supposed to be doing what?!

Goddamn it, I’m tired.  Good thing I already wrote 46% of my NaNoWriMo obligation.

Tonight, my Doctor Who meetup group went to a Harry Potter pub quiz at our favorite mobile eatery.  Outside.  It is about 40 degrees. That’s Fahrenheit; Celsius would be about 4.

Which felt accurate. 

Which felt accurate.

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I’m still not warmed up entirely, despite two helpings of hot butterbeer (don’t ask me what was in it, but it was delicious) and climbing under two blankets.

So I’m rereading my outline.  My life is about to get very antisocial, and I needed to spend some time with my friends before I actually step through the dark and scary wardrobe and come out in the landscape of Main Character 1’s mind.  Writing stories with hugely emotional characters makes me wish even more that I had someone to ground me when I leave their heads.

Well, there we go then.

Well, there we go then.

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I think it best to write most of that person’s scenes first, as much as I can, and then get into Main Character 2’s head, where things are a little lighter.

In the meantime, I found a place I might be able to submit Tunerville unsolicited, so I’ve been doing another hard copy edit.  It’s so much fun lugging around a giant binder full of paper.  I’d love for someone to say, “I want to read your book!” and then I can watch his/her face when I thump down that huge pile of wood pulp and say, “Here!”  Muwahaha.

“I don’t understand--I pictured it like this.”

“I don’t understand–I pictured it like this.”

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It’s an ugly process, but that’s the way it goes.

NaNoWriMo 2014 – Secret Book Begins!

I must be nuts to do NaNoWriMo again, but here it goes!  On November 1, I will plunge headfirst into Secret Book and I won’t be out again until the end of the month.  It worked for Tunerville, so I reckon it will work for this book as well.

As I mentioned before, I have a complete outline (one that actually makes sense).  At the end of it, I should have a very rough but workable draft.

If I survive, that is.

If I survive, that is.

Image:  Deb/On the Flip Side…Baking *damn that meatloaf at the link looks good*

In no particular order, I’ve been doing these things to get ready.

Watching all the TV shows I got behind on during my holiday

 I may have to skip Season 2 of Agents of S.H.I.E.L.DI’m so behind there’s no way I’ll get caught up.  Since I just got a spanking new 4G phone, perhaps I can sneak it at lunchtime.  Or watch an episode a night until I’m done.

But I’m also behind on Once Upon a Time (though not by as much), and I missed The Walking Dead on Sunday night.  Truly a first-world problem, having all these great shows.  If I get caught up, I can spare an hour or two here and there to watch.

Preparing all the digital resources I will need

This includes making playlists, which I’ve already done, and syncing them across my devices so no matter if I’m at home or writing on my lunch at work I can plug in and create.  Music helps me evoke emotion in my writing, and this particular work is very much tied to one composer.

Maestro.  :3

Maestro.  <3 <3 <3

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Cleaning the damn house

Meant to do that on Sunday; didn’t get it done.  Urp.  I think I should spend some time every night this week doing some clearing up.  I wish I could hire someone to come in once a week whilst I do this—then I could use that time for writing instead.

Letting everyone know I’ll be AWOL for a bit

As much as I need fun breaks, I will have to bail on some things I want to do.  Don’t take it personally.  It’s the book.

Oh, you go ahead.  I’ll just be over in the corner angsting over my pages. 

Oh, you go ahead.  I’ll just be over in the corner angsting over my pages.

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It is extremely difficult to find a subtle picture on that website.

See?

See?

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That includes you, my lovely readers.  I’m not sure if I’ll be blogging every day like I did last time.  Depending on how it is going, I might only post once or twice a week and give you updates.  When I’m writing well, I sometimes blow right past my bedtime.

Working out my time management strategy

I refuse to stop working out, and I still have a holiday skating show to do, so time management will be key here.  I cannot spend eight hours surfing the Internet (noooo!).  I’ll have to work every spare moment that I have.

I’ve included a small widget called Picometer at the upper right corner of the main blog page, right below the header, to show my word count.  It’s set at NaNo’s 50,000 word default.  Since I’ve already started Secret Book, so far I have 23,187 words.

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I got the widget at http://www.writertopia.com/toolbox –it’s just a small bit of HTML.  Many thanks go to the designer.  It’s set now at the number of words I’m starting with, so if you care, you can check my progress even when I’m not posting.  I promise I’ll update it every day.

My lunch hour is almost over, so back to my actual, paying work I must go.  If any of you are participating in NaNoWriMo, please put a link in the comments so I can follow you as well.

Happy Halloween!

 I don’t know what it is either.  Just smile and nod and back away slowly. 

I don’t know what it is either.  Just smile and nod and back away slowly.

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